I know that i won't be the only one to say this to you. I really like the sprites and the Plot, and the animation everything. The only thing thats lackimg is voice acting. Even though your dialogue is pretty awesome reading the text boxes really detracts from your animation. Get yourself a bunch of voice actors and this will definitely become one of the more popular series on newgrounds.
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